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Faces in the Crowd
Watching and Waiting
No one stops to help.
Watching and Waiting
No one stops to help.
I'm... not sure what brought this about. And yes, it's very short. Miniscule, even. But I like it.
It's something about crowd mentality.
It's odd when the comments are longer than the piece, isn't it?
It's something about crowd mentality.
It's odd when the comments are longer than the piece, isn't it?
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Yes, yes it is. I like that you used 5-5-5 for the lines, as it would have been boring to just turn this into another Haiku.
But, were I you, I would recommend working on spacing and word placement (as in not in a sentence but on your 'canvas'
if you intend to do more free-verse.
But, were I you, I would recommend working on spacing and word placement (as in not in a sentence but on your 'canvas'
if you intend to do more free-verse.